Inhaling the Sea

As I dared into the sea,
I found the strong waves slapping on me,

And as I moved further more deep,
Sand slipped from underneath my feet,

As I went upside down with the waves,
Lost direction in endless water around,

And I inhaled the water with each breath,
The salty delight filled lungs perfect to death,

Lost consciousness, absolute blackout in my head,
Sea was calm , an end to all turbulence !!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Madappattu Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Highly tragic....simple rendering...love
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace