Inhaling, Stepping To Rain Music

Vital air fragrance,
Repetition syncopance,
Inspire senses’ dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:50 PM
OK, I had to look up syncopance -- very clever use of this word -- dancing in the rain, runny nose, fresh air, taste buds popping. . . all these different rhythms. Very clever my friend.
Wilson Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Very kind! And I'm all wet, for 2 reasons, it's raining out, and I didn't think the word "syncopance" existed!
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