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Inhaling, Stepping To Rain Music

Vital air fragrance, Repetition syncopance, Inspire senses’ dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/1/2014 4:50:00 PM
OK, I had to look up syncopance -- very clever use of this word -- dancing in the rain, runny nose, fresh air, taste buds popping. . . all these different rhythms. Very clever my friend.
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Chaim Wilson
Date: 12/1/2014 5:04:00 PM
Very kind! And I'm all wet, for 2 reasons, it's raining out, and I didn't think the word "syncopance" existed!

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