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Infinity's Line

Time was an option I did not realise, As I stood by the ocean, As I gazed in your eyes. As I drank down sweet water And the children ran by, As I bought me a bargain, I did not see the signs. Not to try to live right or be one of the wise, These are things of great moment In the deep astral tide. When the woman of wanting And the man of despair In a loss of good reason To grief make repair. And the folly of logic And the labour of doubt In the chasm of eternity doesn’t merit a shout. As they make straight the furrow Not the one on their brow And do ponder the reason Of why, when and how? How to chasten your neighbour, Or tell him what’s right! That should make your feel valued Though I doubt that quite. So the people of destiny give it their all As they smooth down their shirt fronts In the crooked town hall Like their traffic attendants they all know the rules One for the makers and one for the fools. And guess who will be paying To keep the words on the page Yet as are rules to the makers So are words to the sage To bring comfort to people To assuage the real grief Forget times plus = elevated position There’s good truth on the street. © Joe Maverick 11-05-2010

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Date: 4/28/2012 3:53:00 AM
Just browsing Joe, really like this one. so profound. harry
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/5/2022 11:11:00 AM
Hi Harry, I was musing is my excuse for this latish reply My thanks..'
Date: 4/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
You are much of a poetical patriarch, Joe! The more of these I read, the less skilled I feel. Wonderful imagery; a poetical scene unreels revealing the quintessential part of your you. I'll keep this to read over a few times!:) So much to absorb through verbal osmosis. Another outstanding write! Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:39:00 AM
I'm not on here as often and missed the feature. Good advice in this one. Vince
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/5/2022 11:12:00 AM
Hi Vince, thanks indeed hope you are well.'
Date: 12/29/2011 7:17:00 PM
wow, joe, i had to look way back to one of your last poems and find this amazing poem I had not seen of yours. ONe of your best, my friend. You should enter it into one of the Soup International contests sometime!!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/5/2022 11:15:00 AM
Hello Andrea, its me.. Pshaww you guessed.? Lol)) Thinking of when I wrote this and more recent events wow! God bless you.'
Date: 11/19/2010 2:26:00 PM
An exceptional write, Joe! A fav today. Glad I decided to visit this page! Congratulations on your poem being featured on Soup this week! Worthy for sure. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 2:25:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a special piece to share with us all luv this happy Sunday ...
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Date: 10/25/2010 1:07:00 AM
Very well-written.
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Date: 8/6/2010 2:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today!
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