Infinitesimal

Thundering tanks, missiles, bombs
     invade the world with fire's alarms

   Far beneath their horrific rounds
     beats the heart of humanity
       ~ infinitesimal sound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A powerful/wonderful yet sad write. Prayer is the answer. Hope you/your son are OK. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Flood Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 5:57 PM
I wonder if anyone, anywhere is actually listening, GW. I think we both know the answer to that.
Flood Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:37 PM
I truly love your reply and I would hate to belittle the gravitas therein but it puts me in mind of ‘Horton hears a who.’ In which everyone listens, but no one HEARS!
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:32 PM
'Anyone... O, Anyone... Hey, Anyone! You there?!' -- Hmm. Guess 'No one' is listening: 'No one... O, No one... Hey, No one! You there?!' I guess we'd better stop here, Terry... 'Terry... O, Terry...'
Lawless Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 8:40 AM
and yet without it.....
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Without it -- perish the thought.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 5:56 AM
You catch the beat of cacophony and zero in on the human heart.
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:22 PM
You know, I've never 'caught the beat of cacophony before.' ~ Old Fumble-fingers... Seriously, your comment just knocked my socks off, Kim. Thank you.
Ball Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 3:51 AM
If only we could stop the bombs and the wars for all time and let the world heal itself. We never seem to learn from the past. A very poignant piece my friend. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:04 PM
If only, as you say... Yet we can't give in to Hamas or to the Master Terrorist, Mr. Putin. If we do, there will be no world left to heal. Thanks, Judy.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 1:41 AM
The quiet of the beating hearts, I see them in my own heart as I read your profound words, huddled in bomb shelters. I'm praying as I try to type this comment.
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Thank you, and please keep praying. Crying, if you desire: The gate of tears is open in Heaven when others are closed. Peace, Gershon
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