Infinite Love

inside our hearts there are four chambers ~ at the core of each lies a heart By David Kavanagh

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/12/2021 12:25:00 PM

WoW! David, You penned such a meaningful and deep one-liner. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/12/2021 12:49:00 PM

Heya Alexis, I’m delighted you get my true intentions here, every heart has another heart at its heart, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/10/2021 11:53:00 AM

Lovely David I just wrote a poem from my heart called Goodnight Liverpool God Bless Sweet Dreams Will you please read it Sir

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/10/2021 12:10:00 PM

I just have Christopher and left comments cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 12/10/2021 11:21:00 AM

Great monoku.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/10/2021 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Eve, it’s quite figurative, but with a deeper message, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/9/2021 3:25:00 PM

Hello David, you are right. There are 4 chambers for our hearts. Cheers! David. Darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/10/2021 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Darlene I’m honoured you chose my poem for a Fave, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2021 11:29:00 AM

David I love the image you painted about the hearts. I am going to make this poem my fav. Cheers! Darlene.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2021 3:37:00 PM

And each chamber Darlene contains a figurative heart at its centre, cascading inwards to infinity, a word play with a little symbolism about immeasurable love, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/9/2021 11:27:00 AM

David, your imagery in this monoku is fantastic; four hearts epitomizes immense love for anything you wish.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2021 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad my idea was each inner heart core to keep repeating into another heart core to infinity, a wordplay perhaps but with some inner dimension, it is said love is immeasurable, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/9/2021 11:11:00 AM

With four hearts you'll have enough love to go around. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2021 11:50:00 AM

And who’s to say Tom those 4 heart cores don’t figuratively possess hearts of their own and so forth into infinity, thank you for stopping by cheers David