Infinite Love

inside our hearts there are four chambers ~ at the core of each lies a heart


By David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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December 12, 2021 at 12:25 PM
WoW! David, You penned such a meaningful and deep one-liner. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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December 12, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Heya Alexis, I’m delighted you get my true intentions here, every heart has another heart at its heart, cheers David
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December 10, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Lovely David I just wrote a poem from my heart called Goodnight Liverpool God Bless Sweet Dreams Will you please read it Sir
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December 10, 2021 at 12:10 PM
I just have Christopher and left comments cheers David
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December 10, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Great monoku.
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December 10, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thank you Eve, it’s quite figurative, but with a deeper message, cheers David
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December 9, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hello David, you are right. There are 4 chambers for our hearts. Cheers! David. Darlene
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December 10, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Thank you so kindly Darlene I’m honoured you chose my poem for a Fave, cheers David
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December 10, 2021 at 11:29 AM
David I love the image you painted about the hearts. I am going to make this poem my fav. Cheers! Darlene.
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December 9, 2021 at 3:37 PM
And each chamber Darlene contains a figurative heart at its centre, cascading inwards to infinity, a word play with a little symbolism about immeasurable love, cheers David
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December 9, 2021 at 11:27 AM
David, your imagery in this monoku is fantastic; four hearts epitomizes immense love for anything you wish.
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December 9, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Lasaad my idea was each inner heart core to keep repeating into another heart core to infinity, a wordplay perhaps but with some inner dimension, it is said love is immeasurable, cheers David
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December 9, 2021 at 11:11 AM
With four hearts you'll have enough love to go around. Tom
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December 9, 2021 at 11:50 AM
And who’s to say Tom those 4 heart cores don’t figuratively possess hearts of their own and so forth into infinity, thank you for stopping by cheers David
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