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Infernal Pond

hell's goal is to heal
shall we evolve and swap now~
shun hell afterward

do each of those who
wish the worst for other kin~
they, too, deserve hell

paradise on earth
guess someone else's hellhole~ 
shield it to yourself

Written: March 27, 2023

Hell Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Paige Hind March 29, 2023 at 9:50 AM Very deep work!

Sara Kendrick March 29, 2023 at 4:52 AM Interesting lines penned. Hell on earth is what some people live for sure. I can't imagine what some people go through. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis March 28, 2023 at 10:54 AM Powerful and scary, my friend, Lasaad. I see a good placement in the contest. Wonderfully done. Blessings.

Alexis Y. March 27, 2023 at 9:21 AM Hi Lasaad, Good write for the contest. Best wishes for the contest. Have a great day my friend-Alexis

Victor Buhagiar March 27, 2023 at 7:34 AM Tread the path carefully.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2023 at 4:20 AM - Well done for the contest, Las ... good luck :) - hugs