Inexperianced

Fingers barely touch
tension beneath fabric---
wet spot appears

Written by:  Richard Lamoureux for Natural/ 
originaly for Nature Sexy Haiku Contest. still a favorite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Liwayway Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Richard...(^_____^) Good day
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:35 PM
oooh, steamy!!! (unless it is describing when a woman spurts milk from her baby touching her nursing apparatus. heehee. I used to hate that). Big congrats to you. I love this one too.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:34 AM
Hi congratulations Richard, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:39 AM
Thanks Mandy
May Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 7:23 PM
congrats on your win Richard
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Richard ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
O'Leary Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Nice Haiku, Richard... Good luck in the contest... Terry
Poet Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 11:05 AM
Should do good in the contest!Enjoyed the read.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Kash Appreciate you stpping by to read.
Loveless Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 9:47 AM
I had to laugh at this. Just for the suddenness...have you ever listened to the band The Lonely Island? They have a song called In My Pants...and this reminded me of it...if you haven't heard of them check it out their good for some laughs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 12:29 PM
I will look it up. Thanks for reading.
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