Jasmine Jade Scott Poet Rhyme

Inductible Loves Deductable

I don't beieve that it's real
All of the time that we've wasted
All of what time just won't heal 
The sick vengeance I've tasted 
The times I returned
The times I recall
Always so disconcerned
With who's taking the fall
Laughing at me while
I'm laughing at you
As if I'm a child
You keep hiding the truth
And I sit with a smile
Wearing your noose
Just passing the time
As if I'm of use
All the while in my mind
There's a voice coming through
Telling me what is right
Telling me what to do
The time is coming 
Because times running out
Will you keep on running
On every account
My being can't stay
Through these constant obstructions
I must find a new way
I must make the deduction

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Anthony Nutter May 2, 2010 at 2:49 AM Excellent piece, love the phrase "I sit with a smile wearing your noose" ending with the hope/need to find a new way. TY by the way for your comment on "Way of Temptation"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 29, 2010 at 8:17 AM Wonderful write Jasmine Jade and welcome to the poetry soup family of poets ... your creative write is amazingly put into words so emotional and passionate in substance... thankxxx for your input omment onto my blog and joining in the fun of birthday celebrations.. I also have a contest posted on site VIVA VACATION.. so u are welcome to enter ...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Cecil Hickman April 28, 2010 at 9:30 PM a piece full of deep reality and convistion sounds like maybe some changes are coming in some way in a relationship,,I hopethings improve in some way,,I always say be happy,,if a relationship will work it will if and especially if both persons are unhappy then it should be set apart,,anyway a great write and I want to Thank you for reading and commenting on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil....PS you have soup mail.

Qui Bee April 28, 2010 at 8:34 PM Reminds me of my parents. Nicely written. Qui.

Travis Tapley April 28, 2010 at 8:34 PM Wow! Excellent work. This was a very powerful and strong poem. I understand these feeling well. i stayed in a bad marriage far too long but I was being hard headed and would not leave my son. I now know the divorce was the best thing for me. I have found the true love of a lifetime and know she is my soul mate. Excellent poem!!!

Joe Flach April 28, 2010 at 8:34 PM Interesting Jasmine. I like the flow and I can empathize. Thanks for sharing