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A Suzette Swan Arc poem. See the article:

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Indispersed: A coined word suggesting to me a nuanced, non-uniform distribution of echoes within silence, but it is up to the reader to draw their own conclusion(s).


 

Indispersed Echoes

my psychic energy 
[contained]
like a Matryoshka doll—
chafing for release … to see the light 
beyond mere existence

to flow freely
         unbound
              by constraints

the Victoria Island of Life: 
                                                                         an island in a lake
                                                                       on an island in a lake
                                                                             on an island

soaring over the pitfalls of Life
          gaining speed with the taste of   f  r  e  e  d  o  m —

                                                                        indispersed echoes
                                                                   r    i    p    p    l    i    n    g 
within silence …
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Hind Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 5:37 PM
I see you changed the title. It was already perfect, now even more so. <3
Hind Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 6:07 PM
"like a Matryoshka doll— chafing for release " that is both powerful and crushing to me... such an amazing write
Richards Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, Paige :)
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