Indispersed Echoes

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Indispersed: A coined word suggesting to me a nuanced, non-uniform distribution of echoes within silence, but it is up to the reader to draw their own conclusion(s).

my psychic energy [contained] like a Matryoshka doll— chafing for release … to see the light beyond mere existence to flow freely unbound by constraints the Victoria Island of Life: an island in a lake on an island in a lake on an island soaring over the pitfalls of Life gaining speed with the taste of f r e e d o m — indispersed echoes r i p p l i n g within silence …

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/8/2025 6:07:00 PM

"like a Matryoshka doll— chafing for release " that is both powerful and crushing to me... such an amazing write

Suzette Richards
Date: 6/8/2025 7:27:00 PM

Thanks, Paige :)