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Indirect Blatency

Can't pinpoint the feeling
Just wanna' settle down
I'm moved towards the meaning
But it faced me around

We tried not to run
For we'd slip on in
Now we're trying to break even
No one's bound to win

Give me advice
I don't have to understand
Indirect blatancy
Catch on to what I can


A reason much too bland
And meaning we can't understand...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/20/2010 2:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today and its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members... good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:27:00 AM
interesting write Ryan, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:40:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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