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Indifferent Love

She stood at the sink with her head in her hands. Fully knowing this wasn't the life she'd planned. Life's seasons were getting shorter and colder. Her bones sing their misery both louder and boulder. Drained by the cruelty of a love gone indifferent. Inside she crumbles seeking strength now unapparent. A glimmer of hope looms in a distant light. Her prayers will soon be answered and end her plight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/4/2012 6:05:00 PM
Heartbreaking write Terry....well done! Hugs.
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Date: 6/5/2012 1:47:00 PM
A very touching write .Enjoyed.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/5/2012 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Kash Huggs TLee
Date: 6/4/2012 10:46:00 AM
A lot of emotion in this one... very moving... very nice... Terry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/4/2012 3:43:00 PM
Helloooo Terry. So glad you have stopped by ~smile~. Thanks for your praise and kind review. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/3/2012 7:10:00 AM
Could feel the life draining away, excellent piece.
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:32:00 AM
This was an old woman I knew in my neighborhood and I watched her just fade away. I guess she had had enough. At the end the neighbors took turns stopping by to care for her as he didn't. Thanks for your kind review. TLee
Date: 6/3/2012 6:50:00 AM
Super poem dear!!!! I enjoyed It much!!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:49:00 AM
Hi Elliott thanks for coming by to review so glad you enjoyed it. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/3/2012 6:36:00 AM
A fine write and a pleasure to read this morning dear poet ! Have a wonderful day....much love, james
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/3/2012 6:45:00 AM
Thank you James for your kind words and kindness to stop by to review. TLee

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