Indifference
So much to say
As brief pulse sways
Words and dry ink
Verse on the brink
Thought words feeling
Feel sets thinking
Round and round here
Mood lingers near
Voice and choice stake
Lines concort take
Blunt words or sharp
Some awkward harp
Tact works the sell
Watch how words dwell
Vain ego baits
In anxious wait
A common soup
To grouse and group
We come, we go
Wit and pun show
Each voice knows how
To hurl right now
Kind comments show
A mindful glow
Better to be
A soul wary
Each to fond verse
As tact observes
Critic be kind
Yet speak your mind
No need to fight
Make wrong a right
Each owns a view
Let kind words cue
Keep up your writes
When views lack cites
Know how you feel
In scant reveal
You write for you
Despite poor views
Steal a peek now
Comment comes how?
Leon Enriquez
28 August 2014
Singapore
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