Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Indian Village

Indian village 
         red ribbons on grouped girls' hairs 
                 vessels rest on waist

                    on the way to pond
             walk slowly with soft foot steps
                   anklets sound music

                    talk and laugh loudly
       bangles bang with ups and down
                    hands unknown lyrics
                                  

                    adds to nature's scene
       chirping birds with sweet sound sing
                              a living video

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Timothy Hicks April 14, 2016 at 3:34 AM An Indian village with intriguing personalities. The anklet music would be pretty to hear, I imagine ... great ending line to this haiku collage, as a video plays in my head as I read through. Bl Devnath April 14, 2016 at 7:18 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM this is pretty!! It is truly like a living video. Bl Devnath April 13, 2016 at 4:23 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2016 at 4:35 PM the beauty of nature only a beautiful soul can capture so wonderfully :) Bl Devnath April 13, 2016 at 4:22 AM Thanks my lovely *friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always, bl

Manmath Dalei April 11, 2016 at 11:38 PM Very very brilliant write. A perfect presentation of Indian village. Smell of India is coming from ur entire poem. Thank u Mr. Devnath for entertaining me.............with love. Bl Devnath April 12, 2016 at 7:09 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your uplifting comment and credit. Loved always, bl