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Indian Summer

Cool breeze by the lake Flowers align the walkway Summer at its end

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2008 8:40:00 AM

Welcome Joi...you capture well the pathos we all feel as the wheel turns.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/8/2008 4:14:00 PM

A very beautiful visual and feeling. Well done haiku. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar

Rick Parise

Date: 9/7/2008 8:08:00 PM

I understand being in salem oregon-I love the seasons here-- your words took me right down to the lake and the memories of a day fading-love it ------Rick Parise Salem ,Oregon A new season shall arrive------------God Bless

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/7/2008 5:06:00 PM

This is a wonderful haiku poem. It certainly addresses two seasons, directly and indirectly. The images are obvious. Great job! ~Joseph