Indian Summer

Cool breeze by the lake
Flowers align the walkway
Summer at its end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 8:40 AM
Welcome Joi...you capture well the pathos we all feel as the wheel turns.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Winter Avatar
September 8, 2008 at 4:14 PM
A very beautiful visual and feeling. Well done haiku. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar
Spence Sr Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 5:06 PM
This is a wonderful haiku poem. It certainly addresses two seasons, directly and indirectly. The images are obvious. Great job! ~Joseph
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