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so many times beneath the stars our lives are lived for fate and scars infancy seems to abound from everywhere it screams its sound too loud to hear the voices true without a sound, it comes to you it strikes with force, a fist, a roar! so strong a warmth you can't ignore the vision marred by human sense for now the journey must commence the trials begin with fervor rise a gaze glares straight within the eyes so hard to suffer ends defeat victories are ever sweet the sky preludes the next advance all surety, no happenstance a place of firm and solid lore where the light and night I wore as symbols of forever more no longer will I toil and chore -Sam Robinson Poem genesis from: Stardust Road by Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 9/18/2013 2:15:00 PM
Samuel, congratulations ............ luv ~SKAT~
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/19/2013 11:50:00 AM
Thanks :D
Date: 9/14/2013 10:22:00 AM
nicely penned, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:24:00 PM
Hi Samuel, stopping by this one again... --A beautiful poem and line... from me...congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/16/2013 7:36:00 AM
It does fit right in!
Date: 9/13/2013 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, samuel
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:02:00 AM
You are talented, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:50:00 PM
Great piece; only hiccups I feel are in line 3 and the last line; "chore" feels a little flat. It fits of course, but it just doesn't feel like a strong ending. I would suggest perhaps changing the wording a bit, to smooth it out and make it stronger. But I really enjoy your style; you have excellent rhymes and phrases throughout :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:47:00 AM
Poetry so well scripted in infinite wisdom...favorite lines "it strikes with force, a fist, a roar!,so strong a warmth you can't ignore" "
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:06:00 PM
I like having those words come in bold out of nowhere...
Date: 9/11/2013 8:40:00 AM
Sam, I enjoyed the fierce rise of your words... hope you accomplish the perfect destination.... a new favorite poem... thanks... xox...Linda
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:03:00 PM
Thanks for the great line!
Date: 9/9/2013 3:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..If for a contest, it should do well..Sara
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