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Indescribeable

how i feel how i breathe how i am how i live how i walk how i do how i touch how i fake how i hurt how i cry how i write indescribeable

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Date: 9/17/2009 3:32:00 PM
Good afternoon Autumn ,That’s because you are far from being inadequate by any means, Because you are equally blessed beyond measure, but life in general will throw obstacles our way when we least expect it to so we just move forward and keep growing on the inside because that is all that we can do. This is an interesting thought that can take the mind in many directions, Thank you for sharing it with all of us here in poetry soup. Have a fantastic evening, Dean
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:39:00 PM
Interesting Autumn, happy writing, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:59:00 PM
brilliant! Autumn!...your art is mesmerizing! keep writing!...jim
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:14:00 PM
Very different. Look for the words that describe the feelings and write more. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:08:00 PM
Unique and creative...Raul
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