Indescribeable

how i feel
how i breathe
how i am
how i live
how i walk
how i do
how i touch
how i fake
how i hurt
how i cry
how i write












indescribeable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Masciarelli Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Good afternoon Autumn ,That’s because you are far from being inadequate by any means, Because you are equally blessed beyond measure, but life in general will throw obstacles our way when we least expect it to so we just move forward and keep growing on the inside because that is all that we can do. This is an interesting thought that can take the mind in many directions, Thank you for sharing it with all of us here in poetry soup. Have a fantastic evening, Dean
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Interesting Autumn, happy writing, Sincerely Moses
Goff Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 5:59 PM
brilliant! Autumn!...your art is mesmerizing! keep writing!...jim
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Very different. Look for the words that describe the feelings and write more. Sara
Moreno Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Unique and creative...Raul
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