Independence Day

Bright displays color the night sky echoes thunder in lands nearby. Kids make plans to hang with small fries. summer is for play. Hold hands looking into her eyes. Independence Day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 6:37 AM
a winning poetry...hope you'll be on the winners' list...smile*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM
a super duper piece in this new style and form.. great words to celebrate luv and freedom..good luck in the contest my friend...
Onclaud Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 11:43 AM
oooh, cory... you sparkle! winning wishes with huggs! :) nette
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Very expressive and creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Deane Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Best of luck in the Rime Couee contes...luv shannon
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