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Independence Day

That July my red kite touched blue sky In noon’s sunlight behind the kite there drifted clouds of fluffy white A patriotic painting I did see: red kite flying free - white wisps floating through sky's glorious blue

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Date: 1/24/2024 5:18:00 PM
Patriotic images in poetry like this and references to our flag make me smile. You express patriotism with subtlety and gentleness that is very appealing. Now this is how to wave a flag.
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Date: 12/27/2023 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/colorful write. Enjoy your win...............
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Date: 12/27/2023 2:51:00 AM
I like how you match the day with colors, Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2023 10:26:00 PM
Beautiful.congratulations
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Date: 12/24/2023 3:45:00 PM
inspirational and uplifting words, Andrea. I remember setting my kites free...I was more interested in watching them drift away than I was in 'flying them.' well done, Merry Christmas, Sara
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Date: 12/24/2023 5:08:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Love it. God bless you always and MERRY CHRISTMAS. love, Gina
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Date: 12/24/2023 3:24:00 AM
Sounds lovely Andrea... nice to see you are patriotic... im more of a rebel to be honest... lol
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/24/2023 10:57:00 AM
I am not very patriotic any more because of all the corruption here but I am trying to be respectful of those who died defending our freedoms
Date: 12/24/2023 2:36:00 AM
You paint a lovely warm sunny day Andrea. Tom
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