Indelible - Haiku 1-10-2017

Haiku 1/10/2017

indelible

winds smooth the valley
gently cleansing the timber
footprints never fade


1/10/2016

submitted to – It’s time for a little haiku – poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 9:17 AM
The foot print man made will always show their results to the trained eye..Once man has gone in and cut the timber, how long will it take for the forest to regrow to its state before harvesting of the wood or does it ever regrow to the original state??? Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Vocabulary lesson comes from my learning new words..Sara
Promise Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 9:49 PM
The imagery was Great john ??. Good luck in the contest. Rainbow.
Lawless Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 3:35 PM
This is wonderful. So someone is doing a Haiku contest? I gotta go check it out!!
Lawless Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Thanks Andrea....I await yours
Smith Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Great imagery John. Best of luck.
Lawless Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Thanks again Tim for your support
Green Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 12:28 PM
Really nicely crafted John. This is beautiful and such a great feeling to your words.
Lawless Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Thanks Chris, we just had a few wickedly windy days so the muse was alerting leaning this way.
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