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Indecisive

Contemplating contemplations, wondering if sunset is my shade

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2023 3:51:00 PM

I wasn’t sure if I should read this one. Sorry I couldn’t resist the pun. Contemplating is a good use of time.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/30/2023 8:47:00 PM

Love the irony... it's a beautiful monoku!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 6:09:00 PM

Such an intriguing monoku! Your poetic pen spills with alluring beauty. "wondering if sunset is my shade" - Wow! Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:41:00 AM

I hope you have finished contemplating contemplation... Congratulations on your placement.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/17/2023 7:58:00 AM

intriguing, interesting, inspired... God bless you with much love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 6:55:00 AM

Lol dahlin! What a profound take on the monoku contest! So well crafted and delivered! As far as i know sunset looks good on you for sure, but sometimes our confused minds can leave us thinking otherwise! Believe me! When i say sunset is your shade! Hah! Goodluck for the contest

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/17/2023 6:52:00 AM

Woah, I can definitely resonate with that feeling of complex contemplations!! And how evocatively you've described 'if sunset is my shade" That sense of vulnerability and insecurity or maybe can interpreted as questioning the essence which actually describes one.. Very deep.. A brilliant monoku poem dear.. Loved reading this!!

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/17/2023 6:49:00 AM

My my!!! If I were contemplating this much I’ll get constipated!!! The shade of sunset sits gorgeously on my dahlin

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/17/2023 6:49:00 AM

My my!!! If I were contemplating this much I’ll get constipated!!! The shade of sunset sits gorgeously on my dahlin