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Incurable Insomnia

will  tell you,,why I dont sleep

 but  this  will only make me weep

 

the  sunken pride of my eyes

 all the dreams that I visualize,,

 

in my naked heart !

 the engine over here doesnt start !

 

i creep and crawl in the staircase

 and think of my pure golden days

 

i  am a patient of this incurable disease

 sucking my blood like a deadly leech

 

with this heavy and powerful Tryptomer 25gm

 I am still awake till 5.00 am !

 

No longer do I pray for the sunlight !

 i  love to walk in the moonlight !………..

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2011

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Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 1/8/2012 11:17:00 PM Evoking positive energy, change, and hope are three main objectives of posting my poetry, although I must admit, writing is a completely different animal. This piece you have shared is very unique! I dig the words you've put down here! ~JSLambert Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/2/2012 12:05:00 PM Smile ˜ Ahhhh, Your lovely beauty enticed myself with Your wonderful kindness to return unto Your Precious Heart again ˜ My Dear Beautiful Priceless Lady * I really do not feel at ease calling Your Beauty merely "Red" ˜ So I shall not yet, my words shall be sincere amid love I would say ˜ Your stirring poem here holds a bit of intrigue but, I have did my best as of recent times to view beyound the night so to speak ˜ To hold these hopes for all and not become ensnared amid the webs of something dark afore these eyes ˜ I would love to walk with Your Loveliness one day aneath the moonslight * Smile, and hear what Your Heart may impart ˜ Keep brushing these Treasures of You * My Love to You Always; John!:) ˜ Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 1/1/2012 7:41:00 PM A poem i can definitely relate with! loved the passion and sadness you brought here, specially the way you closed the piece! My Best wishes in the New Year for you, Red Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/1/2012 5:17:00 PM RED, a very touching poem.. especially for one who knows what you mean by ~Incurable Insomnia~ I also love the way you ended your poem... best wishes this year, can't wait to read more of your work this year. Always ~p.d. Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 1/1/2012 12:32:00 PM Good to know someone else has the same problem ,now I don't pray for light ,I get up and read the paper.I like the wording in your poem !! gets a 10.lol Anne Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/1/2012 10:18:00 AM Touching and very well written Red,love it. HAPPY 2012 !!!!oxox love from Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/1/2012 9:37:00 AM Well first I must thank you for such sweet comments on my poems... made me smile so much... ANd re. this piece, The moonlight is always an inspiration, I quess will have to write you a lullaby to help you sleep... always with a hug n smile Michael Login to Reply

John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 1/1/2012 8:19:00 AM Oooh, it paints a bit of a bleak image, but i guess insomnia does that! Somebodies been a busy girl past few days, i guess creation in all its manifestations never sleeps. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/31/2011 5:17:00 PM Enjoyed reading this creative work..I have been there..Mine was usually early awakening and not being able to go back to sleep..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 12/31/2011 1:05:00 PM well written poem depicting the pros and cons of those drugs that stabilize the neuro transmitters for us folks. Sounds like the dosage may be a bit much if it doesn't let you sleep .... then again..... like you said// moonlight or sunlight that... is the question. Thanks for your comment, Red Login to Reply