Incubus

Arms spread; you were nailed to the living room wall
Struck dumb; I could not heed your faint, pleading call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 12:15 PM
riveting piece , tom... beautiful work and good show of strong emotion...:) huggs
Kiya Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 4:37 PM
i like this you should read feed upon my soul its also kown as succubus 5stars
Poet Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Very nice Tim!Congrats on the win.
Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 8:01 AM
glad i've seen this wonderful poem, and congrats for your placement in Deb's contest...
A   Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 7:18 PM
TIM, CONGRATULATIONS IN DEBBIE'S Two Timer's"" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ pd
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Tim - oxox big hug to you - // Anne-Lise <@<@<@<@<
Gasun Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win, Tim! hugs:) Leonora
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Tim. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
Liwayway Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 1:23 AM
congratulations on your win friend Tim :) cheers!!! (^_^)
Mannan Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 12:59 AM
Beautiful Tim. Many congrats for this win luv.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:16 PM
CONGRATS TIM ON A DYNAMIC WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
Guzzi Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Well you my fine friend are not one for a woman who is faint of heart [how did you know my fantasy?? ;)] Congrad's on your big win! Cher Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on a winning two line poem.
A   Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 4:00 PM
Hi Tim, wow..this image is scary... good luck...pd
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 3:30 PM
oooh, a good one for a Halloween entry too!! congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 10:59 AM
By jove I think you've got it!! HUZZAH Light & Love
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