Incredible


               When just you left,I cannot remember.
               I cradled incredible crying moment.
               I could not protest, but to surrender.
               When just you left! I cannot remember.
               How could I know? You were going forever.
               I was confused,just sat indolent.
               When? Just you left! I cannot remember.
               I cradled incredible crying moment.
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July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Anisha, that's deep. the moment one cradles in tears... LINDA
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July 3, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thanks
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