Incomplete Song

Remember the walk we had at a dawn? 
You mocked the fog and sang me a song

I cursed the cascade for being so rackety 
You cursed the wind for being so wheezy

Arms in arms, walking and dancing 
The sun too rose giggling 

We passed through a garden, some buds, and birds
We passed some playing kids, nurses and mosques

The steepest mountain we climbed and laughed 
The deepest dive we dived, and survived 

Whale, sea horse, and shark stood shocked
As with lively skills, we had them tricked 

Now the sun is sitting, the moon is waning
Our song is still not finished, and it has started snowing 
          
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30th Oct, 2020 (11:30 pm) 
Note: this one is about love, and our short lifespan. Offcourse, it is easy to pass through different stages of life when you have a lovely companion, but no matter how much time you get, it will never ever be enough. Death never stops chasing us, even if the companions stay loyal forever ). (I am hell sleepy right now, but wanted to write this one lol.)
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Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 8:39 AM
I am very happy to find yet another poetic gem that you have composed. This quite clearly expresses the wonderment of love and being in love. When one values the other over all else. A fav... a very uplifting poem! God bless...
Zahid Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 10:05 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you
Crabtree Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:54 PM
A great poem, Pagunda. You're right. There never is enough time :)
Zahid Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Unfortunately
Thomas Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 11:25 AM
A beautiful life song Paghunda; may you sing it forever :)
Zahid Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Amen...thanky you
Proxenos Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Hi Pagunda, What a breathtaking poem - the love of your life will be when you lose your breath when your first meet then, when you have your first kiss, and you feel there is nothing under your feet, you are floating and when the day comes that you are close enough to make love, then you will know, when the feeling is overwhelming, and encompassing. I have made this poem a fave. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Sounds fantastic Jennifer! Thanks a lot :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:38 PM
I like how you have made this symbolic of your love and lifespan. It's very cute how you used the images of things like the sun rose giggling!!
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:10 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it. Our lifespan on this earth is indeed very short. Thank you Andrea. Stay blessed
Downing  Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 3:53 PM
I believe you will finish your song with the right one. Great write, Paghunda
Zahid Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Thanks for the wishes
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 10:51 AM
Maybe you are in a parallel universe .... Maybe my poems seem better there lol
Zahid Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Haha
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 9:08 AM
I have many poems about falling in love, but you will know when you do fall...
Zahid Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Somewhere in a parallel universe, I might be reading your poems right now.... (you may not know but I am a big fan of your poems,, would read it anyway...
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:54 AM
That must mean you have not found the right person to sing it too...
Zahid Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Well, to be honest, I do not know how people fall in love.. . Like your love for your family is another thing, and I believe in this love. As far as that romantic love is concerned. It is absolutely Greek to me... Like you can not fall in love with 'anybody', esp, when you have drawn a circle around yourself, and promised yourself not to cross that line, & never to fall in love.. Hehe May be ppl fall for each other when they want to fall, you know, well no idea.??
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 1:33 AM
Is your song complete?
Zahid Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:50 AM
I haven't even sung it yet. Nobody has heard it yet. Haha
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Creative way to go for the contest. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Zahid Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:49 AM
Thank you Sara
One Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 11:43 AM
Love is a beautiful thing, but it does not always last... Sometimes it's taken from us, downtimes it leaves us.... But we always have the memories..
Zahid Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Indeed... thank you for the comment
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