Incandescence

Stray meteoric passion’s red hot beam 
fire-wires moonlight dervish in a bold splash
clouds of glitter coat my sweetheart’s gleam 
as solar powered pulse rates cut a dash 
welder’s arc vapours rise from pure raw ash 
us copper tinted fiery orbs ablaze 
melt first flush easels with our brimstone rays 
spiral eye bright lumens fuse galactic 
species skyline sweltered rapt current phase 
with torch bearer incense so ecstatic



Date poem created : 10 August 2020

                   Title : Incandescence
            
                
              Sponsor  : Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:22 AM
A very descriptive winning work in Edward's contest. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 5:23 AM
Another generous review of my efforts, Sara. Many thanks. To be honest I awoke this morning feeling very lively. But that isn’t always the case. Writing like any other skill can be exhausting. From the bottom my heart I do hope your day ends on an inspirational note. I’m so pleased my report on your work pleased you
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 9:09 PM
A very belated congrats here. You nailed incandescence!
Ibeh Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Congratulations on winning my contest with this delightful poem, Howard:-) Bravo!
Kerr Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:55 PM
Words fail me Edward. Thanks sincerely for reading this poem and for awarding the decision in my favour. Deeply honoured. Howard
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