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Incandescence

Asteria glides on a turquoise sea caressing Luna in indigo hues, velvet drizzles cuddle a wilted tree topaz prairies in fragrant whispers fuse. Golden fireflies flicker with wind to cruise. In honeyed mist of soothing astral streams my blue primrose petal dances in dreams, your halo orchestrates secrets untold, bathed by healing incandescent moonbeams in darkness your silk aurora I hold. August 6, 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 21 - Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen: Incandescence 10 syllables per line checked on howmanysyllables.com and Soup Counter ~Winner: 1st Place

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/26/2020 10:40:00 PM

Hello Aditi mam, Your vocabulary is astounding :-) Sometimes I have to read more than twice to understand the depth..:-D Wonderful use of imageries..too!! Congratulations on your top win.. I believe your doing well. Take care much love:-)

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/20/2020 11:03:00 AM

Aditi, Congratulations on writing such an image -laden and inspiring work. Your imagery ripples with colourful nuance. But most significantly your richly deserved win. Full marks Howard

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2020 10:06:00 AM

your imagery is amazing, many congrats on your win Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 8/19/2020 5:38:00 PM

Circling back to wish you deserved congratulations for your top placement, Aditi. Hope all is well ~ John

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/19/2020 4:49:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations for your top win in my contest with this outstanding poem, Aditi:-) Stunning imagery!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2020 12:44:00 PM

so gorgeous, Aditi. In my opinion one of the best I've seen for imagery.

John Watt

Date: 8/11/2020 9:51:00 AM

More gorgeous writing from your talented pen. Your imagery of nature, both floral and celestial, is scintillating. Your colors and portrayals of light dazzle the senses. Your ending is perfect. I am delighted to read this today (multiple times) and I sense a winner. God bless you, my dear friend ~ John

Eve Roper

Date: 8/7/2020 12:05:00 PM

Aditi, Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. blessings

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2020 11:50:00 AM

This is perfect Aditi, so well composed. Hope you're well and good luck in the contest. Tom