In Your Shoes

In Your Shoes

I bow my head in shame my dear
For all the wrongs I have done to you
You swore your undying love for me
And I took it all and swore it too 

You may wonder at such a thing
As me admitting such deception
But it has only lately come to light
That I discovered this lack of affection

I truly believed my love for you
Matched the love you swore to me
But now I find I just didn’t know
And I simply could not see

We buried you late in November
About seven years ago or so
Now I’ve decided to begin a new life
And the starting has been rather slow

But I finally found a new beginning
And I am thrilled clear to my toes
But in finding this wonderful love
I discovered a fact no one knows.

I now know what you felt for me
It was true love without any ending
For that is the way I feel now
True love without any pretending

I do hope you can forgive me
And I can get rid of this terrible shame
I am glad to know how you felt
Because now I am feeling the same

So rest in peace my dear
I have learned a lesson from you
It is not something I soon shall forget
I know now what it was like in your shoes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/2/2014 12:33:00 PM
A very beautiful poem. The storyline is sensational and rhythmic , I could follow the story form start to finish. Often times many of us cannot feel what the other person feels unless we are put into that situation. Well done!
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Connie Moore
Date: 2/2/2014 12:45:00 PM
thank you Christine. your comment is very much appreciated. Connie
Date: 1/29/2014 3:10:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Look forward to reading more poems from you.
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Connie Moore
Date: 4/17/2014 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much. I will certainly post more as they come. Connie
Date: 1/29/2014 12:16:00 AM
An interesting poem. Thanks for posting.
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Connie Moore
Date: 4/17/2014 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for reading it. Glad you liked it Connie
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