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In Your Beautiful Eyes

******************************************* Amid a star ferried night loves tears came falling ~ Into Your beautiful eyes, their dreams were calling Through the whispering tides a heart left drifting While I stood by Your side; the pain was melting.... And the moon cast her glow as a choir bringing, joy To sweep this night with heavens Angels singing As I stood by Your side; these tears left falling Unto tides that wash away the pain; still drifting Afore loves moon cast a light; dreams went calling ~ Upon a star ferried night; and hearts were melting.... ******************************************* ....“In Your Beautiful Eyes” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 11:51:00 AM
I love this verse! Hope all is well. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:07:00 AM
I love it! You make me want to ask the next man that looks me the eye to tell me what he sees and the response better be as good as this piece.
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Date: 5/7/2012 10:07:00 PM
Excellent expression of love of melting heart, enjoyed much, my friend. Loved always bl
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 4/28/2012 4:37:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem :)
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Date: 4/26/2012 6:33:00 AM
wonderful imagery here John, so sincere, harry
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