Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Than-Bauk

In Trance - Win

I saw her once
At a glance and
In trance I stood.

My heart was light
Walked with light step
But light waned out.

Heard her foot near
Was all ears but
Oh, fear crept in.

Looked at her face
Could not place her
Chased to see her.

Then she was nigh
Heard her sigh still
Felt pry on me.

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Date 23-11-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Form Than bauk
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Any Poem Goes # 15 by Linda

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Kelly Deschler April 10, 2014 at 10:56 PM I think everyone can relate to this poem. You captured this moment so well here. Congratulations on your win, as well, Dr. Ram!...Thank you for the kind congrats!

Tim Smith April 9, 2014 at 2:09 PM What a fabulous win here..congrats Tim

Joseph May April 9, 2014 at 10:02 AM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 9:46 AM A fine win Dr. Ram

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM Lovely write Dr Ram ! Congrats on great win !

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 3:43 AM DR RAM, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 9:51 AM :) it was a good one :) Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2014 at 9:46 AM Hi Linda, thanks for my placement

Jay Loveless November 26, 2013 at 10:59 PM Beautiful write :) And thank you very much for your comments <3

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 23, 2013 at 10:12 PM Hi Dr. Ram, this is a wonderful than-bauk and a beautiful, unforgettable moment! I enjoyed reading it tonight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Shirley Candy November 23, 2013 at 2:02 PM Aw...it reminds me about love at the first sight kind of story. I love the scenery, Dr Ram..Good luck with the contest.. :))

Carly Lalion November 23, 2013 at 4:42 AM Memorable once-in-a lifetime scene! Thank you for reading me and good luck in this contest.

Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2013 at 8:23 PM Hello Dr Ram, this one is mysterious... Reminds me of a song called.. "Don't Stand So Close To ME." ;) good one...Linda