Poet. Undertaker Poet Cinquain

In To the Gloaming

Gloaming
early evening
day following sunset
dare see changing good
nightfall.



dated 30-07-2013

written for the contest "One in three:write Beautifully" by Andrea Dietrich.

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Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2013 at 2:40 PM I'm now seeing who wrote this one after my contest. It was a nice simple poem, Jenish. I was looking for more imagery and cinquain form does not allow much for that!

Suzanne Delaney August 5, 2013 at 9:40 PM Lovely snapshot of time progressing through the landscape ...a winner for sure. SuZ

Shadow Hamilton August 2, 2013 at 2:55 AM Jenish Hi lovely gl in contest Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick August 1, 2013 at 5:04 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your input is appreciated...Sara