I Have Forgiven You But It Will Never Be The Same Poet I do not know?

.in This Life I Bleed.

.In this life I bleed tears.
.In this life I bleed.
.In this I bleed hatred.
.In this life I bleed.
.In this life I bleed lust.
.In this life bleed.
.In this life i bleed fear.
.In this life bleed.
.In this life I bleed love.
.In this life bleed.
.In this life I bleed courage.
.In this life bleed.
.In this life I bleed envy.
.In this life bleed.
.In this life I bleed blood.
>In this life I die<

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 19, 2008 at 10:26 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol

Michael Torres November 11, 2008 at 4:52 PM Ayana we have to get yu to the hospital for bleeding so much lol. This is gripping and touching. Olease comment on my poems would love to hear your insight. Micahel Torres

Daver Austin November 10, 2008 at 6:43 AM Just one poem, Avana? Good to hear from you with your passionate voice. Thanks so much for reading my little haiku. Seems your poem sums up what life is all about. There's gt to be more...this is implicite in your poem. Write more, more, more! Love, daver