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Craig Cornish - Silence Listens Contest

In Secret Caverns, we harken to the darkness. Our headlamps’ shut off, we are anywhere, we are everywhere, it doesn’t matter where. No matches, no breeze, no breath to strike up the light, no moon, no sun, no shuffling. Absolutely still - our souls, our conscience, what disturbs the ash of our ultimate destiny. No one dares to whisper in this golden cage. The ages pass by, primordials stir, Jesus is still in his wrappings. My heart, subdued, like earplugs in their caves. My eyes, wide open, stand at attention, to retain the inner light. I stand in the lake, my life jacket does not glow; however I grow in sensation; I float upright. We are the rests between notes. We dote on the inky calm, not a mere closure of lids; liars, those pair of skin divers, that blink away shine. Sans shadows, peaking at the sublimity of time.

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Date: 5/31/2025 7:43:00 PM
A lot of magnanimity - you wrote of Silence like I never read before, Kim! Each line a raw testament to experience- and talent, gift, whatever you want to call it. xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:49:00 PM
I hope you are having a nice weekend. Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I appreciate you so!
Date: 5/31/2025 7:13:00 PM
There is such depth in your poem that I read it more than once, winding thru the imagery and feel was a 'poetic bounce' worth the ride. I'm not 2nd guessing or arguing w/ your Hair placements, I do though want to know if mine made you laugh? I really experienced that morning. Glad to have read this, Kim. It has amazing bits in it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:49:00 PM
Yes, it made me smile and laugh. Sent you a soup mail. Thank you for your lovely comment, my friend xx

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