Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

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In Their Glory Years

Splendiferous dish of deliciousness, a bundled scent.
     Tifblue blueberry, gardenia, smilax, lily, orchid choir.
In their glory years, the peak of true senses ferment.
     Splendiferous dish of deliciousness, a bundled scent.
Their garden romance of plenipotent flame is spent.
     Rouse of sight, sound, touch embrace a burning desire.
Splendiferous dish of deliciousness, a bundled scent.
     Tifblue blueberry, gardenia, smilax, lily, orchid choir.

5/21/2021
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Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:12 PM Kim, congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:49 PM Congratulations on this splendid entry winning Kim. My mother’s favorite flower was the gardenia because of its wonderful scent. Every time I see or smell one I think of her. I understand you have lost your mother recently. My deepest condolences for your loss. Have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:32 AM Congrats and high fives for your "splendiferous" win, Kim. Very unique and wonderful word play.

Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2021 at 9:55 AM Congratulations on your win. I love your write and picture/gardenia. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf May 22, 2021 at 8:59 PM You've done syllabula-flummoxed me with this splendiferous write, Kim! Cheers, gw Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2021 at 4:43 AM lol...thanks, Gershon!

Victor Buhagiar May 21, 2021 at 11:16 PM Wonderful triolet. Bet it rates high. Kim Rodrigues May 22, 2021 at 4:07 AM Thank you. Big hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2021 at 4:28 PM wow, this ought to be a winner. I have written one so different from everyone else (not posted yet) I wonder if I ought to write another. My best triolets are already written so I can't submit an oldie! I just saw you reply to someone that your mom recently died, so I wanted to come here and give my condolences. Sorry for your loss, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 7:43 PM Thank you, Andrea for the condolence and compliment.

Honestly J.T. May 21, 2021 at 2:19 PM Nice one; -JT Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 7:42 PM Thank you!

Carolyn Devonshire May 21, 2021 at 8:30 AM Love all of the flowers you mentioned, especially the gardenia. when I grew them, they created a beautiful fragrance throughout the yard. Lovely Triolet, Kim. Best wishes in Kim's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 9:04 AM Thank you, Carolyn!