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In the Wilderness

This! my home?
Greedy me on the whole

Like an oak fern, I blossom
When all is gone I _ lonesome

The trees, hence not green
It's leaves dare not grin

Just me and my wildbeast
To fill in the back seat

Just me and my thoughts(left/right)
To Cary the weight and bear the loss

A blind man can tell
"in the wilderness" I have built a nest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/27/2016 2:48:00 AM
Very cryptic, Basit...But also very good. You have penned a little piece of poetry - That imparts a big wallop! My best regards - And have a fulfilling New Year! :) john P.s A much deserved seven.
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Basit Lateef
Date: 12/27/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thanks sire.
Date: 12/26/2016 6:03:00 AM
Poignant emotions nicely versified ...
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Basit Lateef
Date: 12/26/2016 4:40:00 PM
'm solely gratified

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