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In the Twilight

In the Twilight, when the star's shine to the depths of the night, I hear you calling me. The voice calmly guides me to your divine sight. My life that is troubled,by the demons that try to take over my subconscious mind. In the Twilight I can see more clearly, I am not afraid of what lies ahead or beneath me tonight. Obstacles that seem to get in every way,where I try to find happiness,I do not delay. A sound of perfection in your undertone, is a chance for me to surrender to the outcome, of the Twilight.

I see the beauty of gods creations, in the night sky. A gentle breeze, that touches my skin, on a warm night, relaxes me and prepares me for the fight. A fight that is yet to come, a fight of heroism to overcome the deadly battle of good versus evil. A chance to join the angels and conquer what needs to be done. In the Twilight,is where I belong. I will take on the demons that belittle me. I must get the upper hand, I will challenge all the demons,that surround me. I will conquer all that is needed to be.

For in life,we only have one life to live. The life we choose is our way of understanding, We will protect the helpless our children should have a chance of not worrying what lies ahead. We are here to break the obstacles that are in the way. In the Twilight is where I choose to stay,until the time comes, when I am needed. To defend all the innoccence,from the evil that tries to get in the way, that voice that calls out to me will be my greatest achievment, to defend all that lies ahead of me. In this world where the true beauty begins, In the Twilight is where it will end.

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/1/2018 4:48:00 AM

Many congrats Maria please let me know who your collaboration partner was so I can congratulate them as well:-) hugs Jan xx

Maria Feliciano
Date: 8/1/2018 8:52:00 AM

Thank u Jan, I wish I knew who was my partner, I wrote the poem it was my first I did here, then I sent it in (smiles), but idk who callaborated with me, if I knew I would like to thank them too. Thank u all for the many congrats it means a lot to me.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/31/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on receiving First Place with this lovely collaboration Maria. : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2018 8:57:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Maria. Well done.

Maria Feliciano
Date: 7/31/2018 9:24:00 PM

Thank you, I am truly blessed. Congrats to you as well. I really appreciate all the comments and feed back.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/31/2018 6:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful!

Maria Feliciano
Date: 7/31/2018 7:06:00 PM

Thank u Susan I am new here, so could u help me, how do I know that I won, I did not get no notice, I am thankful that I won I appreciate all the congrats. I'm just a little confused. (((Hugs))) thank u everyone xoxoxo