In the Stream

shallow breaths begin…
watery dark moccasin
shinny swelling skin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/26/2011 4:10:00 PM
This is really nice. Great imagery. (gotta get on you again about the word shiny. haha) Luv, Andrea
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