In the Southern Sun

He said
Look at here boy
Aint nothing worst than life
But you might as well live
And times are coming 
For better or worse 
You might as well hold on 
 
I’m still here 
And until I die 
I’ll be the same man
He says 
Boy I’m still here
And until I die 
I’ll be the same man 

I said father
I’m going to move away from the river
I’m going to be a city man
He said, sun down, it’s getting late
And you’ll have all night to chase those dreams
He said son now
Your mother calls so goodnight

I’m still here
And until I die
I’ll be the same man
He says 
Boy I’m still here

He wasn’t my real father I can’t even call him that 
Around a southern sun he marched in a straw hat
It’s a hundred degrees outside he must be crazy
Seventy-six and he takes on the humidity 
Better than me

He says 
World war II was nothing new
You should’ve seen Vietnam 
He says you see boy
I’m still here
And until I die
I’ll be the same man

RIP S.G.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/14/2009 4:22:00 AM
Jerry,what an outstanding write. He was a proud man. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2009 4:14:00 AM
Interesting writing. Some men are really strong. God bless those strong ones and help the weak ones. Sara
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:48:00 AM
fascinating. ! i remember the war that devastated Sulu. it is in the southern too. I feel sad and enlighthened, Love it. Nice log. keep writing to inspire otherS!!!!
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