In the Rough

axes chip and spark
daylight drips slow through small holes
diamonds pulled like teeth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:58 PM
You're so good at this form R !
Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:34 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
A  Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 10:45 AM
wow so sharp. love it
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