Notes About The Poem

In the Red Room

gilded and blooming
from the red room days go by
panoramic views

songs all the summer
forest green from my windows
divers birds converge

velvet nights rose dawns
as all the world passes by
life is tinged with red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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June 18, 2021 at 9:05 AM
WoW! Evelyn, You chose a lovely picture to accompany your string of limericks. There is good imagery and content throughout your poem. Like always, I enjoyed the view. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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June 18, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. The rooms from which we watch life go by are interesting in themselves. I am so gratified by your appreciation of my poem and choice of picture. Have a wonderful day and weekend, as well. Hugs, Evelyn :)
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June 18, 2021 at 4:27 AM
Love the pic you chose…seems “you in a nutshell.” Lovely poem! Bright dreams, sweet lady!
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June 18, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Thank you for your wonderful appreciation and bright well wishes, Kim. Have a blessed weekend. :)
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June 17, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Every line is a deep dive into eloquence and Imagery - each line is to be savored like "pure petals" Dear Evelyn, you penned a so wonderful Haiku. Blessings and regards
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June 17, 2021 at 7:29 PM
It brings gladness to my heart to know that you found such pleasure in these lines, Lasaad. Thank you very much for your kind words inspiration. Have a wonderful evening, Evelyn
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