Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

In the Rear-View Mirror

Used to take a while
  to work up a sweat
Had to jog a few miles
  or sprint like a jet…

Well, those days disappeared
  in the rear-view mirror
Now I sweat climbing stairs
  that I’m older is clearer

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Alexis Y. April 28, 2022 at 8:02 PM Hi Gershon, Your well-penned poem is so realistic and relatable. Well done my friend. Have a good evening:-)Alexis

L Milton Hankins April 28, 2022 at 10:39 AM I think we can all relate to this one, gw. Perfecto!

Kim Merryman April 28, 2022 at 9:00 AM I can sure relate to this! Good one, Gershon! Blessings, Kim M Gershon Wolf April 28, 2022 at 7:05 PM You can relate because you're taking of your mother, right, Kim?! :) Gershon

Caren Krutsinger April 28, 2022 at 2:28 AM I am so THERE. I feel this one! Gershon Wolf April 28, 2022 at 7:05 PM I am so THERE too. Just peek in your rear-view mirror, and you'll see me fast approaching. ~ Howling Wolf

Anselmo Boles April 28, 2022 at 12:14 AM If we didn't age, we may never recall what youth was like. Good fun G.W.!...ab Gershon Wolf April 28, 2022 at 7:02 PM How about this: Let's 'youth,' and we'll all reminisce about what age was like! Sounds like a plan to me, Anselmo.

Tom Cunningham April 28, 2022 at 12:03 AM Lol I think we can all identify with this one Gershon. Tom Gershon Wolf April 28, 2022 at 7:02 PM Identify, eh?! ... I thought that was you in my rear-view mirror, Cunningham! lol.