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In the Presence of God

“I am Gabriel, in the presence of God, I stand.”
The importance, of the angel’s words,
like lightning strikes - holy, grand.
Far better joy than the song of birds.
Silences faithless tongues, stuns nerves.
The predictions come to pass. God does not lie.
Brilliance of wingspan; respect deserves.
Christ’s come to us, The Dayspring on High.

God’s angel was gentle with Mary, not offhand.
Oh, to hear the treasure of choice words.
Still, she’d have to tell her fiancé, to stand 
before him with her claim; to cross words.
To ponder, hold joy, in wonder, her world’s
turned upside-down. In praise, she’d magnify
the Lord. God chose a young virgin who serves.
Christ’s come to us, The Dayspring on High.

Zechariah, in silence, saw God’s right hand.
He questioned, even though an angel burns
before him. Sans understanding of what God planned.
A babe in his old age? A gift disturbs?
God means what He says. Listen to His words.
God is not a man, that He should lie!
Every scripture, in His timing, He confirms.
Christ’s come to us, The Dayspring on High.

Admire the breaking of sunrise light.
The canvas of the sky, a morning sigh.
Dumbfounded speak, the blind have sight.
Christ’s come to us, The Dayspring on High.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Maverick Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:33 PM
Much needed a write such as this Kim I'm glad to be a contemporary, very Touching content.' All blessings.'
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Thank you! Merry Christmas!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Dayspring on high....left me breathless.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Merry Christmas!
Hind Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 3:35 PM
What a beautiful Christmas piece, dear Kim!! "Dayspring on High" is just breathtaking. <3 hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Paige! Merriest of Christmases to you! Hugs!
Rodgers Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Dear Kim, What moved me most was the balance you achieve between divine grandeur and tender humility, the angel’s brilliance, Mary’s quiet courage, Zechariah’s doubt, all converging into praise. Kim, what a song of faith, and it was a genuine joy to experience. Merry Christmas and Holiday Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 1:52 PM
Thank you, Daniel! Merry Christmas and blessings to you and yours!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:09 AM
WOW!!! What a write with a great picture. FAV for me... "Good luck" if for a contest.  Have a Very Blessed Christmas and Happy New Year 2026.........
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Thank you for fave, Paula! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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