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In The New Utopia

Nobody owns anything but everyone is rich - for what greater wealth can there be than cheerfulness, peace of mind, and freedom from anxiety? ~Thomas More

She won't let caretakers cut down wildflowers
living under the hedge at the boundary edge
of her very small plot in its very small slot
in the unending rows of homes in repose,
in which sameness is virtue and uniqueness is vitriol. 

Rebellion is not trivial, in fact it is evil;
how dare you suppose, or try to expose
the snugly fit knots designed by despots;
the ones who make pledge, and use every sharp wedge
to split off the capers of the few troublemakers!

Epilogue: The woman who loved wildflowers has disappeared
and no one remembers her, or if she even existed at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gifford Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:50 AM
Hello Chetta, an excellent piece and a great read. Wishing you a beautiful day.
Achara Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Thank you. It's one of my favorites.
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 3:27 PM
This flows well Chetta..Also it is rich in content And ambiguous enough to represent lifes Journey of contradictions and continuity.'s
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Wow, I can ponder over this one for awhile! Hugs ~ Kim (A fave)
Greenhough Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:37 AM
This poem is a tell-all on the basic Big Brother concept. Our freedoms have been eroded. Your poem is lively. I like the rhyme and message.
Achara Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Thank you.
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