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In the Morning

When droplets let your face to smile at you opening the new day around new hopes idolizing glory days shall happen again you dream When wet grounds after the rain you walk through on bare feet nostalgic past keeps alive in memory be the mirror of present days Opening the curtain around your bed room waving goodbye all sadly sad nights in the morning in the morning

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/12/2024 10:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/26/2016 11:21:00 PM

Hi Tiyo, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Moon Flower

Date: 4/26/2016 9:52:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Tiyo. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 9:34:00 AM

A wonderful read Tiyo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2016 8:37:00 AM

TIYO, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT