In the Moonlight I Saw Her

In the moonlight I saw a girl..
As beautiful as an expensive pearl..
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Sitting in train on a chair...
Falling on face,layer of brown hair..
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Head covered though But not fully..
She had managed that green scarf beautifully..
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With her nails touching her teeth,totally unaware..
That somebody is having at her,a continuous stare..
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Couldn't observe more about such wonderful creation...
Because she left at the very next station..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 8:34 AM
I like it, a very nice write. Vanishing girl, I remember such so well in my youth. So many times I failed to speak because I was in such awe of the beautiful lady. Such memories are treasure too.
Khan Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:24 AM
Haha :P Thank you very much for visiting :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Lovely write with nice twist at the end - well done!
Khan Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 3:43 AM
Thank you :)
Halliday Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Nice piece. Thanks for commenting on my Mr and Miss Right.
Khan Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 11:37 PM
My Pleasure :) Thanu :)
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