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In the Moment

In the moment of intense grief I wanted to find the instant relief I did not realize the lost soul isn’t easy to find I searched everywhere Even in places Where no one goes, no one dares (unfinished)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/24/2012 12:09:00 PM
Hey Ashek,this is reading like another beautiful write! I can feel the heart in it.. :o) It's there! Just let it flow~~~ And there is no need to bow to me...Your works have beauty and love and heart in them as well.It's nice to see you back again! You took a little time off for a while there.I always look forward to reading your words as well.Don't give up!Put your heart on the paper.. :o) I'll be looking forward to the finish of this heartfelt piece. :o)
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