In the Moment

In the moment of intense grief 
I wanted to find the instant relief
I did not realize 
the lost soul
isn’t easy to find
I searched everywhere 
Even in places 
Where no one goes, no one dares
(unfinished)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 24, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Hey Ashek,this is reading like another beautiful write! I can feel the heart in it.. :o) It's there! Just let it flow~~~ And there is no need to bow to me...Your works have beauty and love and heart in them as well.It's nice to see you back again! You took a little time off for a while there.I always look forward to reading your words as well.Don't give up!Put your heart on the paper.. :o) I'll be looking forward to the finish of this heartfelt piece. :o)
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