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In the Moment

beautiful stillness 
living in the silent pause…
between and beyond

freedomsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2020 at 6:12 PM

I see this was a trophy win. Congrats again, PM. I wish you had some new poems for me to see. I believe I have seen all your poems already. but let me check among some other older ones.

Line Gauthier

June 7, 2019 at 10:48 PM

Lovely, PM. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 5, 2019 at 6:40 AM

Congratulations :))))

Susan Ashley

June 4, 2019 at 8:27 PM

Your deep and meaningful Senryu is so beautifully expressed, P. M. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win with this fantastic gem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole

November 4, 2018 at 6:28 PM

"beautiful stillness" I love that thought. Even in silence, an empty moment- beauty can be found. If one truly looks beyond the distance. This is a keeper for me. :) Brandy