In the Moment

I get lost in the moment watching and reading about certain mysteries
48 hours is a particular show where I feel like I'm at the crime scene
and the head line news on the tube and especially the internet
where the facts don't always add up is the ones I cannot forget

Especially the ones where they say no foul play was involved
the case was opened and closed so fast they quickly say its solved
claiming the case is a suicide I try to be a sleuth like Columbo
where red flags go up in my mind and there's more I need to know

Combing and pouring over the few clues I end up scratching my head
and wonder why these were the only facts the public was fed
where you know there are holes in the story and its still a mystery
frustrated you try to let it go thinking ambiguously

In my mind I try to see exactly what happened that fateful day
who the victim was, their circumstances, and if there was foul play
specifically the cases where the victim had suddenly disappeared
turning up dead weeks later in a remote spot as we had all feared

This murder mystery moment arouses my inner curiosity
an amateur sleuth searching for answers that finally satisfies me.

6-10-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 5:50 AM
Congratulation on your win! I'm with you. I absolutely love a good mystery whether written or movie. TV is hard for me with so many commercials but DVR"s help that. A well-written poem.
Cunningham Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Back with congratulations Cheryl, Tom.
Hoffman Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 12:47 PM
- Congratulations on your great win poem, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Anne-Lise; really appreciate it! Hugs ~Che :)
Sands Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:29 AM
You have written with truth about what happens out there and showed how it brings you into the moment. Well done. Congratulations for your win :)
Hoffman Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Thanks so much for placing me as one of the third place winners and for very kind congrats Heidi; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Lovely verse Cheryl, Used to love watching Columbo, he always got his man Tom
Hoffman Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Columbo was a pretty good show back in the day! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Michael Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 11:56 AM
They are making it hard to believe anything anymore...Nice write...All the best Cheryl
Hoffman Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:57 PM
I totally agree Arturo; much of it is hard to believe anymore! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Arturo; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your interesting write, Cheryl ... Several layers have been powerfully suggested ... What we visualize get filtered through our thoughts ... Great ...
Hoffman Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Probir; when I'm watching 48 hours I'm totally engrossed & grossed out at the same time over the crime...thanks again for stop by!~Che :)
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