Joseph May Poet Rhyme

In the Moment

The plot thickens in a whodunit thriller
 As I try to figure out who's the killer
 Which character will be on the hook
 As I turn the pages of my book

 Each page turned unravels the mystery
 Some of the suspects are getting jittery
 Was it the butler of whom they were afraid
 Or was it the beautiful buxom maid
 I'm on the last chapter, but it's still not clear
 But I'm in the moment, it's as if I'm there!

   6-8-18
   In The Moment Contest
  Sponsor: Heidi Sands

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FJ Thomas July 15, 2018 at 9:03 PM Love a book that does that Joseph!

Susan Gentry June 22, 2018 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your win! I'm with you on this. I love a good mystery. Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2018 at 12:46 PM - Congratulations on your great win poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands June 18, 2018 at 9:30 AM You brought me right into the moment of the thriller with this one. Well done. Congratulations for your win :) Joseph May June 18, 2018 at 10:54 AM Thank you for my placement Heidi..

Stephanie Warrillow June 10, 2018 at 5:03 PM You picked up the moment really good love your little poem

Anisha Dutta June 9, 2018 at 7:35 PM You really picked up the moment.Best wishes.

Probir Gupta June 9, 2018 at 9:45 AM Beautiful arrival in the moment ... The suspense intact ... A nice read ...

Richard Lamoureux June 9, 2018 at 8:40 AM Perfect! I know the feeling.