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In the Moment

The plot thickens in a whodunit thriller As I try to figure out who's the killer Which character will be on the hook As I turn the pages of my book Each page turned unravels the mystery Some of the suspects are getting jittery Was it the butler of whom they were afraid Or was it the beautiful buxom maid I'm on the last chapter, but it's still not clear But I'm in the moment, it's as if I'm there! 6-8-18 In The Moment Contest Sponsor: Heidi Sands

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Date: 7/15/2018 9:03:00 PM
Love a book that does that Joseph!
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I'm with you on this. I love a good mystery. Well done!
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Date: 6/18/2018 12:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2018 9:30:00 AM
You brought me right into the moment of the thriller with this one. Well done. Congratulations for your win :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2018 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Heidi..
Date: 6/10/2018 5:03:00 PM
You picked up the moment really good love your little poem
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Date: 6/9/2018 7:35:00 PM
You really picked up the moment.Best wishes.
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:45:00 AM
Beautiful arrival in the moment ... The suspense intact ... A nice read ...
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:40:00 AM
Perfect! I know the feeling.
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