Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

In the Midst of My Madness

In the midst of my Madness,
Encountered, I, my Fate
It sang to me a song of Sadness:
That my Soul would suffocate!
Death doth drip in doleful fits;
It asks, "What have you to give?"
A thousand hearts of atoms split
In the place where Love once lived...

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Kelly Deschler September 12, 2013 at 12:42 PM An amazing piece of poetry! Love can make us go crazy sometimes, even when we have love and when we do not. Crazy isn't it?...What I really love about your poems is that they are direct and to the point. And, I don't have to read them over and over to understand it. Excellent work! Just That Archaic Poet September 12, 2013 at 4:11 PM Your review humbles me, Kelly. I always fear that my pieces are perhaps too "existential" or "esoteric" to be easily understood, but I can clearly discern you have a distinguishing eye, and you understand things that only the Soul can perceive :)