Rama Balasubramanian Poet Rhyme

In the Middle of Forest

standing under umbrella of green surrounds

inhaling deeply myriad perfumes of leaves around

listening to multitudinous pleasant sounds that abound

observing different life forms that astound

exhilarating bliss I found

01.09.2021

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Paul Callus September 6, 2021 at 7:31 AM Your descriptive poem is a delight to read, Rama. Bliss is often to be found when we partake of nature's offerings. ~ Congratulations on your high-flying win. Warm regards // paul

Krish Radhakrishna September 6, 2021 at 2:10 AM Rama, this is really nice! I can relate to that!! In India rain brings relief and you can actually do that. In UK we take cover because the wind chills us to the bones!! I could briefly experience what you describe, and could see the gulmohars in my imagination.

Mike Bayles September 4, 2021 at 5:45 PM Very nice rhymes, Rama.

Janice Canerdy September 4, 2021 at 11:37 AM This is beautiful, Rama. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Gary Radice September 4, 2021 at 10:40 AM A lovely mono - rhyming poem Rama. An escape from the presures of today in your six lines. Congratulations & Cheers - Gary

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2021 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on a top win with this charming nature poem, Rama

Joanna Daniel September 2, 2021 at 1:07 AM This is brilliant poetry, Rama, sure to win:) simply awesome:)

Supraja Kannan September 1, 2021 at 10:06 PM I could feel the bliss too... Beautifully written...

Shirley Hawkins September 1, 2021 at 8:01 PM Exhilarating bliss I found..... How could you not feel this in such beautiful surroundings. Magic poem Good luck in the contest Rama.

Judy Ball September 1, 2021 at 3:24 PM Lovely Rama. I was able to feel like I was standing beneath the trees in a forest glade. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Beryl Edmonds August 31, 2021 at 11:30 PM Lovely Rama, standing under an umbrella of trees described beautifully… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 31, 2021 at 9:58 PM It's an enchanting scene you've created, Rama. Best of wishes for the contest. :)