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In the Middle of Forest

standing under umbrella of green surrounds inhaling deeply myriad perfumes of leaves around listening to multitudinous pleasant sounds that abound observing different life forms that astound exhilarating bliss I found 01.09.2021 For: Line Gauthier Bite Size Poem no19

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Date: 9/6/2021 7:31:00 AM
Your descriptive poem is a delight to read, Rama. Bliss is often to be found when we partake of nature's offerings. ~ Congratulations on your high-flying win. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 9/6/2021 2:10:00 AM
Rama, this is really nice! I can relate to that!! In India rain brings relief and you can actually do that. In UK we take cover because the wind chills us to the bones!! I could briefly experience what you describe, and could see the gulmohars in my imagination.
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Date: 9/4/2021 5:45:00 PM
Very nice rhymes, Rama.
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Date: 9/4/2021 11:37:00 AM
This is beautiful, Rama. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/4/2021 10:40:00 AM
A lovely mono - rhyming poem Rama. An escape from the presures of today in your six lines. Congratulations & Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/4/2021 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on a top win with this charming nature poem, Rama
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Date: 9/2/2021 1:07:00 AM
This is brilliant poetry, Rama, sure to win:) simply awesome:)
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Date: 9/1/2021 10:06:00 PM
I could feel the bliss too... Beautifully written...
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Date: 9/1/2021 8:01:00 PM
Exhilarating bliss I found..... How could you not feel this in such beautiful surroundings. Magic poem Good luck in the contest Rama.
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Date: 9/1/2021 3:24:00 PM
Lovely Rama. I was able to feel like I was standing beneath the trees in a forest glade. Lovely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/31/2021 11:30:00 PM
Lovely Rama, standing under an umbrella of trees described beautifully… Belle
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Date: 8/31/2021 9:58:00 PM
It's an enchanting scene you've created, Rama. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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